I like your line gesture a lot, it has consistent line weight and the proportions look realistic. It’s impressive how similar your no reference/memory drawing is to your line gesture drawing.
I really like the texture of the shading of your line and mass gestures – it gives them a very compelling loose quality. I think there could be more variation in the value across the subjects to indicate light and shadow, though.
I like your line gesture a lot, it has consistent line weight and the proportions look realistic. It’s impressive how similar your no reference/memory drawing is to your line gesture drawing.
I really like the texture of the shading of your line and mass gestures – it gives them a very compelling loose quality. I think there could be more variation in the value across the subjects to indicate light and shadow, though.