I like the composition and clear sense of perspective in this drawing. I think the shadows/creases in the page look a little too much like solid blocks of color rather than shading, however, especially on the center fold. That could probably be helped by making the shadows’ gradients more noticeable and lightening their contours.
I like the composition and clear sense of perspective in this drawing. I think the shadows/creases in the page look a little too much like solid blocks of color rather than shading, however, especially on the center fold. That could probably be helped by making the shadows’ gradients more noticeable and lightening their contours.