Izy,
What a great drawing of your friend, it has a pensive emotion and playfulness to it. The mark making and design in the shirt really add to the entire drawing. A few minor suggestions: Round out the volume of the left eye, lower lid-just a bit. As is, it looks unfinished but this is just due to the reflection on the glasses. Also, add a bit darker value on the pinky to make it sit back under the shirt. Lastly, bring more tonal shape to the hair at the crown of the head-it looks a bit to spiky, and comb-like. Ease up on that mark-making just a touch. Great work overall and congrats on a wonderful semester!
Izy,
What a great drawing of your friend, it has a pensive emotion and playfulness to it. The mark making and design in the shirt really add to the entire drawing. A few minor suggestions: Round out the volume of the left eye, lower lid-just a bit. As is, it looks unfinished but this is just due to the reflection on the glasses. Also, add a bit darker value on the pinky to make it sit back under the shirt. Lastly, bring more tonal shape to the hair at the crown of the head-it looks a bit to spiky, and comb-like. Ease up on that mark-making just a touch. Great work overall and congrats on a wonderful semester!