Jaelyn, This is such a playful portrait and you really captured that spirit in your drawing. The value range is a bit heavy on the mid-tone range. I might push the darks in the hair more and increase the value around the nostril furrows / shadows so they are distinctly different from the bubble. Overall the drawing works well and I am so glad that you were in the class. It was wonderful to see you in person in studio and really appreciated your hard work.
Enjoy the Winter Break!
Jaelyn, This is such a playful portrait and you really captured that spirit in your drawing. The value range is a bit heavy on the mid-tone range. I might push the darks in the hair more and increase the value around the nostril furrows / shadows so they are distinctly different from the bubble. Overall the drawing works well and I am so glad that you were in the class. It was wonderful to see you in person in studio and really appreciated your hard work.
Enjoy the Winter Break!